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It's actually funny how he tries, but fails, to insult Marshal and Dentren but doesn't have the guts to insult me because i'm not South American. I find you a hypocrite because you a insulting Peruvians when Peru was the only country to help Bolivia when Chile took the Bolivian coastal territory, due to Bolivia failing to keep their part of the bargain to not raise the taxes on Chilean exports. There can't be such a thing as Bolivian folklore and since you keep talking about "simple sense" then think about how can you call a dance that was created centuries before a country existed part of their culture but not as Andean folklore, how it really is, but as Bolivian folklore? If you want to have a real discussion like civilized people and share thoughts, and heck maybe you'll learn your wrong or that we're wrong (highly doubt it since you just insult), then i suggest making an account which will take no more than 1 minute instead of showing your weak side by using Guerrilla-like tactic of posting and running before someone answers the post. Right now you're only making Bolivia look bad. And by the way the term "roto" is childish term for Chileans as well as misspelling Peruvian with "Peruan". I may not like your ideas and thoughts but that does that mean I'm gonna call you "Boliche" or "Bolian"? No, that's why I spell it correctly to show respect, even though you don't deserve it I am not one to judge. [[User:Unknown Lupus|<span style="color:blue">'''Unknown Lupus'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:Unknown Lupus|<sup><font color="Blue">'''T'''</font><font color="Blue">'''a'''</font><font color="Blue">'''l'''</font><font color="Blue">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 21:25, 21 October 2009 (UTC) |
It's actually funny how he tries, but fails, to insult Marshal and Dentren but doesn't have the guts to insult me because i'm not South American. I find you a hypocrite because you a insulting Peruvians when Peru was the only country to help Bolivia when Chile took the Bolivian coastal territory, due to Bolivia failing to keep their part of the bargain to not raise the taxes on Chilean exports. There can't be such a thing as Bolivian folklore and since you keep talking about "simple sense" then think about how can you call a dance that was created centuries before a country existed part of their culture but not as Andean folklore, how it really is, but as Bolivian folklore? If you want to have a real discussion like civilized people and share thoughts, and heck maybe you'll learn your wrong or that we're wrong (highly doubt it since you just insult), then i suggest making an account which will take no more than 1 minute instead of showing your weak side by using Guerrilla-like tactic of posting and running before someone answers the post. Right now you're only making Bolivia look bad. And by the way the term "roto" is childish term for Chileans as well as misspelling Peruvian with "Peruan". I may not like your ideas and thoughts but that does that mean I'm gonna call you "Boliche" or "Bolian"? No, that's why I spell it correctly to show respect, even though you don't deserve it I am not one to judge. [[User:Unknown Lupus|<span style="color:blue">'''Unknown Lupus'''</span>]] | [[User_talk:Unknown Lupus|<sup><font color="Blue">'''T'''</font><font color="Blue">'''a'''</font><font color="Blue">'''l'''</font><font color="Blue">'''k'''</font></sup>]] 21:25, 21 October 2009 (UTC) |
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To Erebedhel, and all other interested contributors
Why don't you help by expanding the history section on how the Diablada came to Bolivia? I'd like to see more about the Bolivian history of the Diablada. How it got there, how it developed, and how popular it is in Bolivian culture. Right now the article only has information on the origins of the Diablada, but it has not much about Bolivia. Instead of removing information, why don't you add information?--$%MarshalN20%$ (talk) 00:56, 30 September 2009 (UTC)
- that's precisely what I'm doing and I must point out that I'm working with Peruvian and Chilean contributors in order to improve the quality of the article, but this is the third time I ask you to decline on that attitude against Bolivia, again this is a culture article, not a politics forum, it doesn't has anything to do with Evo Morales. The history shows that the Diablada regarding its Spanish influence has its origins in the w:es:Ball de diables from Tarragona and the indigenous origins are from Uru ancestry, but also that the "Diablada" is a genre of what became the colonial "Devil Dances" the "Diablada" is one of those, there are the Sajras of Cuzco, Diablos de Naiguatá, Diablos de Chuao and Diablos de Yare in Venezuela, Grandiablos in Panamá. The problem arises and, that's where a good article has to explain in a unbiased way, about the definition of Diablada, that word is a neologism because all the historical books refer to "danza de diablos" the name "diablada"was changed in 1904 as a new genre of that dace characterized by those specific steps and mask was used by The Gran Tradicional Diablada de Oruro, the same group traveled to Puno to show their "style" in 1918 and later in 1956 to Chile. Now everyone can interpret as they please. The article must "explain" the problem not take a side. That's the history. As you like if I refer to the UNESCO statements I'll use the word "traditional" and let the reader interpret it as they please. But you have to delete your nationalistic aggressions and stop bullying people here to put biased terms, you can see the exact translation of "reivindicación" here: http://www.wordreference.com/es/en/translation.asp?spen=reivindicacion it's "demand", get it? --Erebedhel (talk) 01:22, 30 September 2009 (UTC)
- All you mention is nice and all, but there are key things you're not willing to understand. Let me make a list:
- 1. The "Diablada" was already being danced in Puno prior to the "Gran Tradicional Diablada de Oruro" going there in 1918.
- 2. The "Diablada" in Puno has always had a different style of masks than that of Oruro. It never copied the Oruro style, because they already had their own style.
- 3. The "Diablada" in Puno was first introduced in Juli; which also happens to be the place where the oldest Diablada took place (The Angels and the Demons battling each other).
- 4. As you mentioned before, the Diablada in Puno takes in different elements (such as "Superman" and the "Mexican") than the Diablada in Oruro. Which, once again, demonstrates the Diablada of Puno is unique.
- 5. The Spanish priests might have expanded the dance with the Urus in Bolivia; but in Peru they first presented the dance in the city of Juli. This is considered this to be the first Diablada as the Spanish priests took in Andean elements in order to promote Christianity as a means to replace the old "Pagan" gods of the native Lupakas.
- 6. UNESCO hasn't said anything in terms of the ownership of the Diablada. This is purposely trying to confuse the reader.
- Finally, don't come here saying you're working "with Peruvian and Chilean contributors." Wikipedia accounts are one-person accounts.--$%MarshalN20%$ (talk) 01:35, 30 September 2009 (UTC)
- 1. Show me one text prior to 1918 where they use the word "diablada" I mean historical text not revisionist newspaper. and answer to the question why the Los Andes newspaper said that very same day of February 2nd of 1918. "first time"? that's a homework for you, if you can answer that question with a serious study then you'll contribute with something.
- 2. I agree actually you had answered to yourself on point 4.
- 3. Poco antes de 1950 las máscaras de Diablada procedían del taller del mascarero boliviano Antonio Vizcarra. A partir de 1956, los artesanos puneños Alberto y Ramón Velásquez incursionaron en este arte link
- 4. No need to answer that
- 5. Exactly the priest presented their "Ball de diables" in Juli, good it's called "Ball de diables" it's documented it's not a Juli dance it's a Catalan dance. Show me where it says on Diego Holguin Book "we presented the Diablada" no he says they taught the "autos sacramentales" to the natives.
- 6 Did I ever said that? no I copied what the document says, you can interpret it as you please and the reader can do that, since when to quote what a document says is "purposely trying to confuse the reader"?
- And when did I say that I'm sharing the account? I meant that I'm talking to them through their respective accounts. I have never violated WP:NPOV or any rules of Wikipedia I have never written any biased article, I'm just pointing out that you made some aggressive comments that do not have place in an encyclopedia, I provided more links none of them correspond to a biased newspaper, I provided the UNESCO link, saying exactly what it says, I provided the RAE link doing the same and I provided a previous article of a Peruvian historian. Instead all the links in the article correspond to newspapers, none of them meets with WP:RS. And this is not a forum, all your comments about subjects not related to the article itself are out of place.--Erebedhel (talk) 02:33, 30 September 2009 (UTC)
- You base your whole argument from who got the name "Diablada" first? That's completely ridiculous. The priests taught their dance to the natives, who then took it and mixed it with their own religious and traditional dances. It is this first introduction of the priests in Juli that create the mixture; this is where the dance hence originated. It wasn't called "Diablada" back then, but it was already using the essential elements of a "Diablada" (The devils and the angels). Even that 18th century drawing demonstrates that the people of Peru were already dancing a "Diablada" (though not of that name). By 1892 (19th century) there is records that in Puno the dance was being called "Danza de Diablos," and that it was still being done with the basic elements of the Diablada that first came up in Juli in the 16th century.--$%MarshalN20%$ (talk) 04:12, 30 September 2009 (UTC)
- Basically, the only argument that can be made in favor of Bolivia is that Bolivia "invented the name" Diablada. However, the dance still originated in Juli, in 1576.--$%MarshalN20%$ (talk) 04:12, 30 September 2009 (UTC)
Well that’s basically why epistemology is important, that’s also why a musicology aiming is required. As I think we both agree the Diablada in Peru is different from the Bolivian one. Why there is a difference? Because the same dance taught by the Spanish the Ball de diables blended in Peru with Quechua roots, and in Bolivia with Uru roots, both "invented" their own characteristics, because if you travel to Cataluña and put three dancers one from Tarragona, other from Puno and other from Oruro they will dance differently, right? So both the Peruvian interpretation is one invention and the Bolivian interpretation is another invention, that constitutes two different things, right? Now precisely that’s why all the information in this article is wrong because the term Diablada stands for the 1904 dance of Oruro as the RAE says while, the "Danza de Diablos of Puno" belongs to another article. Together with:
It’s a matter of the correct use of words, maybe for you it’s not important and that’s your opinion which I respect but basically encyclopaedias require of the precise use of language. I’m just pointing out that so if we agree the you’re free to work all you want in your article you can name it Danza de Diablos de Puno or as I suggest which is more accurate is Saqras or Sajras.
Regarding Juli in 1576, well sadly the w:es:Ball de diables was invented in 1426 in Tarragona so we can’t be so sure if it was “invented” in Juli, it was just taught there. You can have all the personal opinions you want about Bolivians I can’t change that but those don’t belong to Wikipedia, this is an encyclopaedia not a nationalistic forum.--Erebedhel (talk) 05:21, 30 September 2009 (UTC)
- Once more, you are incorrect. You ask why the dances are different, but the answer you provide is an interpretation that you are creating in your own mind. In Peru and in Bolivia, the dance mixed with a common Aymara root (not Quechua). The dance stopped being the European "Ball de diables" once the Native Americans mixed in their own culture into it. This is what happened in Juli, Puno, in 1576. The dance was not named "Diablada," but it was by all means a "Diablada" as it mixed European with Native American beliefs, and had all the essential concepts of a Diablada. The dance that originated in Juli spread to other areas, including eventually Oruro. The information in this article is completely correct. The variations that have taken place in Oruro and Puno are exactly that: variations. It's like Charles Darwin's "Origin of Species" taken into cultural terms. All of Darwin's Galapagos finches were different species, but in the end they were all finches. In the same way, the Diablada of Puno and the Diablada of Oruro are of different species, but they are both from the same root. Encyclopedias require that the correct information be presented, and by you trying to claim something for Bolivia based on a name, you're completely misunderstanding the point of an encyclopedia. This is not about who invented the name first, but rather where the dance originated, why it originated, how it originated, and how it has developed over the years. The Diablada originated in Juli, Puno, in 1576.--$%MarshalN20%$ (talk) 13:51, 30 September 2009 (UTC)
It would be interesting to look after the relationship between the diabladas dances in Puno, Oruro, La Tirana and other places. Althougth the diabladas are related, all they do not need nesesarly to originate from the one danced in Juli on 1576. They could have very well developed independently at different locations after the arrival of missionaries. Dentren | Talk 23:14, 30 September 2009 (UTC)
- That's true Dentren but the thing is Bolivia won't just claim the Carnival of Oruro their folklore, they are saying that all the other Diablada dances from Peru, Chile and other countries are a copy of theirs. They all are similar because it's a mix of Spanish and Aymara dance, but they use different costumes and such. Even though each region in the Viceroyalty gave the dance their own personal touch, you still see the resemblance of the origin place, Juli "The Aymara Rome", which is why they are all similar. --Unknown Lupus 23:42, 30 September 2009 (UTC)
Once more, you are incorrect
- 1. The dance mixed with a common Aymara root (not Quechua)
- wrong: In the Spanish version says “The Dr. Ricardo Arbulú explains that in a letter Diego González Holguín to his superior, the Jesuits in their mission in Juli, have taught to the natives, a song-dance about the Seven deadly sins and how the angels defeat the demons, to Christianize the inhabitants of the zone.”
- Who is Diego González Holguín? He’s the writer of the book named Vocabulario de la Lengua General de todo el Peru llamada Lengua Qquichua o del Inca
- 2. The dance stopped being the European "Ball de diables" once the Native Americans mixed in their own culture into it. This is what happened in Juli, Puno, in 1576
- wrong: Diego González Holguín only mentions in his letter that he taught the dance, he never says "A new genre was born" he was just Christianizing, to assume that the Diablada was born in Juli because of a vague reference of a letter in the year 1576 is a bigger misinterpretation than the meaning of "traditional" in the UNESCO declaration.
- 3. The dance was not named "Diablada," but it was by all means a "Diablada" as it mixed European with Native American beliefs, and had all the essential concepts of a Diablada.
- wrong: What's then for you the "meaning" of the word Diablada if not what the Diccionario de la lengua española de la Real Academia Española says it is? and I remind you it says:
Typical dance of the region of Oruro, in Bolivia, called that way because of the mask and the devil suit wore by the dancers
- 4. The dance that originated in Juli spread to other areas, including eventually Oruro. The information in this article is completely correct. The variations that have taken place in Oruro and Puno are exactly that: variations
- wrong: I'll answer the last question for you to show you clearly where your mistake is, you think that the definition of Diablada is "any dance with devils" but you just got the concept wrong and you built a non-academic article based entirely on your interpretations of some editorials in Peruvian newspapers, well that constitutes a violation of WP:NOT#ESSAY and WP:NOT#JOURNALISM.
- 5. It's like Charles Darwin's "Origin of Species" taken into cultural terms. All of Darwin's Galapagos finches were different species, but in the end they were all finches.
- wrong: You actually didn't get the point of the whole book (which isn't a surprise) but precisely what Darwin says is that every species in the world evolve from a previous specie. The man evolved from the ape, birds from dinosaurs, etc. Now please and I'm really waiting for it, go to the article of Dinosaur and show me where it says that the dinosaurs aren't dinosaurs but since later they became finches they have lost their name and from now on schools should call them finches.
- 6. In the same way, the Diablada of Puno and the Diablada of Oruro are of different species, but they are both from the same root.
- correct: The same root is called Ball de diables not "Diablada", the word Diablada stands for the 1904 Oruro dance.
- 7. Encyclopedias require that the correct information be presented, and by you trying to claim something for Bolivia based on a name, you're completely misunderstanding the point of an encyclopedia
- wrong: You're trying to claim something for Juli based on a vague reference of a letter in 1576 which you didn't read but you took a whole bunch of conclusions while you fail to do the most basic thing when writing an article which is to look for the definition in the dictionary. You can't write an article about a subject whose definition you don't even know, that's obvious.
- 8. This is not about who invented the name first, but rather where the dance originated, why it originated, how it originated, and how it has developed over the years. The Diablada originated in Juli, Puno, in 1576
- wrong: You fail to see that I'm not talking about the name I'm talking about a genre of the "devil dances" if you don't understand how genres work well then read carefully an example of Rock music, and see how a genre evolves, that's why musicologists bother to name each branch with a different name so people who study music can distinguish between Aboriginal rock and Raga rock and don't get confused with the usage of names, the dictionary itself is guiding you to not make the mistake you're doing of using the wrong name; Diablada is the dance from Oruro and Danza de Diablos de Puno, and the Sikuris del Barrio Mañazo belong to Peru. they are similar? yes, they have the same roots? yes. But Diablada is not "any dance with devils" is a specific genre born from the blending of the Spanish traditions and the Uru traditions, you can grab a big black marker and cover the word "traditional" from the UNESCO declaration if it bothers you so much but there still says that the "diablada" has its roots in the Uru gods which later due to Syncretism with the Spanish traditions became the Diablada, in Peru a similar process happened but with the Quechua traditions but that's called "danza de diablos" and those are the ones painted there, and the same happened in Venezuela and Panama, the Spanish priests who taught the "autos sacramentales" in each place aren't even the same persons. The only ones making that mistake with definitions are the Peruvian revisionist newspapers that based on the same logic of saying: "Oh look a dog has four legs, then it's the same as the buffalo, look both have four legs" confuse the name. If you want to describe something the basic thing you have to do is to look for it in the dictionary.--Erebedhel (talk) 00:36, 1 October 2009 (UTC)
- I already presented my willingness to come to some sort of compromise. However, your stubborness prevents from anything being positively done about the article. You've been a registered user for a while, and yet now you get involved in an article that had been abandoned and without references for a long time. Strangely enough, you only join it in order to challenge the referenced material other users include. I still see no positive additions from your part.
- 1. Where does Holguin say that the dance is a mixture between native Quechuas and the Europeans? The Lupakas are, or at least were, Aymara peoples (they were conquered by the Aymara before the Incas came along; and the Incas were very lenient in allowing other cultures to keep their traditions).
- 2. Holguin is a primary source, and working directly from his book in order to interpret what he says is considered to be breaking WP:OR. Secondary sources, in this case a History PhD of Peru, presents a verifiable (Historians, especially PhD historians, are supposed to have the intellectual honor code of only presenting the truth to the best of their knowledge) and reliable statement in which it is said that the Diablada was created as a result of the European and Native American cultures mixing in Juli in 1576.
- 3. Once again, you're going by names and word meanings. I'll add in the article that Bolivia "invented the name" Diablada, but that's all there is to it that Bolivians can claim.
- 4. No, a Diablada is not "any dance with devils." It's a dance that comes out a result of the mixture between Native American and European elements. The same case is with the Zamacueca, which resulted out of a mixture between Native American, Spanish, and African cultures. The Zamacueca then evolved into the Chilean "Cueca" and the Peruvian "Marinera." For a while, historians thought that the Peruvian "Marinera" developed from the Chilean "Cueca," but this theory has been debunked and now it has become more accepted that both dances derive from the "Zamacueca." Now, you don't see Peruvians claiming that Chileans are dancing a Peruvian dance; do you?
- 5. In order to reply to this question, I'll use a quote from Michael Chazan, author of "World Prehistory and Archaeology": "A popular example of the popular misconception of evolution is found in the statement, 'Humans evolved from apes.' The correct statement is that humans and chimpanzees share a common ancestor." Read the concept of Multilineal evolution. This is exactly the same case that has come to develop such dances as the Diablada.
- 6. The root of the "Diablada Punena" and the "Diablada de Oruro" is a common ancestor which nowadays is termed "Diablada." The name wasn't around back then, but then again the name "Dinosaur" wasn't around when the dinosaurs were walking; or was it? No. We developed the term in order to describe these long extinct animals. Simlarly, the name "Diablada" wasn't around back then, but now we use it to describe a dance which holds the essential concepts to be a Diablada.
- The last two points are not even worth replying to. For number 7 you claim I'm making conclusions, while I'm simply presenting information from secondary sources. Therefore, you are lying. For number 8, you don't even understand the concept of evolution and how it relates to such things in culture as dance and music; and yet you're trying to explain it. First explain the concept to yourself before you try to explain it to other people. The Diablada originated in Juli, Puno, in the Viceroyalty of Peru in the year 1576.--$%MarshalN20%$ (talk) 01:27, 1 October 2009 (UTC)
- Well I’ll finish this because you tagged me as "stubborn" WP:APR violation. But let me point out that if you read carefully my first intervention here was to ask you politely to remove the national insults according to WP:CIV and WP:NPA and you ignored that, I asked you to do that several times, but they are still there.
- Then I just quoted more references, I just copied the full first paragraph of the UNESCO declaration without interpreting it, I just copied it. And mentioned as the IP 75.69.0.58 did above me some other authors, PhDs, historians and etnomusicologists that have studied the subject as well such as Julia Elena Fortún and Teresa Gisbert. But you started to rant and disrespect me instead of saying thanks and read the links I provided you WP:AGF
- The only reason I was participating in this discussion was because you made inappropriate comments about a nation revealing your bias, those opinions do not have a place here and should be removed and an apologize should be given. Besides I also wanted to ensure that when there is a dispute all points of view should be taken into consideration and had to be explained as such letting the reader take their own conclusions. The redaction in the article only shows one point of view which is "Juli 1576 and the Lupacas". I said that there is for example another version which says that in the case of the Bolivian Diablada it's related to the Urus which is also referenced, the reference is in the UNESCO document which I provided. Failing to include both versions is against WP:NPOV.
- I have no intention to add any content right now, first of all because regardless I have an spotless record of contributions, not in the English Wikipedia but in other projects, you, for your nationalistic bias have a preconceived concept of me and you only try to harass me and insult my nationality like you did with the use of propaganda so I know I can't work with you because you consider that you're the police of this article WP:OWN engaging a disruptive editing WP:DE of it without taking into consideration other more reliable sources. But above all because I know I'm working with other people who know more about the subject, we work in a respectful way and aren't mixing folklore with politics, besides we're working not with newspaper articles but with books and serious studies so I know that the outcome of that article will be less biased than this one.
- Meanwhile I do officially express my nonconformity with the title of this article based on what I consider a misinterpretation of the concept as I mentioned, based on DRAE if you manage to present a reliable source that can challenge the Real Academia with the definition of the word Diablada, then I'll remove that, meanwhile I'll present all your policy violations in RfC and ask for your national insults to be removed. You won't hear from me anymore till I have finished my work.--Erebedhel (talk) 08:53, 1 October 2009 (UTC)
Name change
Somebody put a "name disputed" tag on the article, but here in the talk page there no subsection to discuss it and itd too long to read the 38687000 KB of discusssions to get it. If somebody propose to rename this article please discuss it here and, seing the discussion above, be brief and precise and discuss other disputed things in their respective sections. Dentren | Talk 12:48, 1 October 2009 (UTC)
- Apparently this user has started a page just for me (I feel special): Wikipedia:Requests for comment/MarshalN20. Well, it relates to this article. If any of you who are interested in showing some support for either one of us (excluding the sock puppets of Erebedel), feel free to comment.--$%MarshalN20%$ (talk) 14:17, 1 October 2009 (UTC)
- No Dentren is not about a name change it's about the accuracy of the use of the word Diablada based on DRAE; here I'm consulting if there are any other definitions that could explain the Chilean or Peruvian POV that's why I'm pointing that out and not moving arbitrarily the article. And what I've presented against Marshal is a User conduct complain not a disputed content one. I'm against his overall behavior against other editors not this particular article. --Erebedhel (talk) 18:20, 1 October 2009 (UTC)
- I see.. The RAE seems to support the thesis on that the Diablada is from Bolivia. Well that s argument in favor of that, hoever we can all see that the term diablada is applied to similar dances outside Oruro and Bolivia. I think the solution to this discussion is to stress the huge popularity the dance has in Bolivia, the Bolivian claim and the fact that Bolivian diabladas influced other ones, such a La Tirana in Chile.Dentren | Talk 19:10, 1 October 2009 (UTC)
- Diablada is a term associated with not just Bolivia's carnival of Oruro. Changing the name would be pointless as you will be promoting the Diablada as Bolivian when most of the facts prove to be that it is most likely to have it's origin in Peru. What are you planning to change the name to anyway? The word is accurately used in this article. Diablada is not only the dance in Bolivia but the dance in Peru, Chile, Ecuador, etc. The DRAE says that Diablada is typically danced in the region of Oruro, not that it is part of Bolivia's folklore. You also have to understand the fact that Bolivia did not exist back then so how can they call it "Bolivian folklore"? It's better if they call it Andean folklore because that's what it is, that's why the dance is know in various countries in South America.Unknown Lupus | Talk 20:23, 1 October 2009 (UTC)
- Lupus makes 2 clear points. The first is that the DRAE does not state that the dance originated in Bolivia, nor does it give Bolivia ownership of the dance. This is the same problem with the UNESCO statement. The Bolivian government has promoted this idea that both of these organizations prove that Bolivia is the owner of the Diablada, and many Bolivians have fallen for that idea. However, neither organization has stated such a thing. Moreover, the DRAE is not even a historical authority of the matter (It's a dictionary!). The second excellent point of Lupus is that Bolivia did not exist as a nation when this dance was created; in fact, even Chile existed before Bolivia. At the time when the dance was created, the whole region was part of the Viceroyalty of Peru (or La Plata, depending on time-frames). However, it is the Aymaran culture of this particular region that is the important note of this subject. The Diablada is a dance that reflects a mixture of Aymaran and Spanish culture, and this is decently put forth in the article.--$%MarshalN20%$ (talk) 21:07, 1 October 2009 (UTC)
hello again, bet you missed me Marshall, i bet you did, well I see now that you found your match here, I ve read the whole discussion and just really makes me laugh how you still try to put your ideas about the diablada as facts with Peruvian letters and newspapers, compared to the facts that a simple dictionary gives, and statements of UNESCO, I mean you say you rely on facts according to newspapers and letters instead of a dictionary and UNESCO, sources recognized worldwide, really!!!! I just want everybody beside you’re Peruvian friends (if they exist) to see this, that’s the main trouble here, a person that claims a lot of things here, insults Bolivia and try to make his points basing on PERUVIAN sources, none international, NONE. i really didn’t come here to argue with you because I dont see the point, Ive tried many times but you wouldnt listen, i just want everybody to see this, so they make up their minds about this really Perubian article, and ask everyone to read all the discussion, its clear who gives facts, and who gives Peruvian newspapers and Peruvians sources as facts. Now you claimed that I am Erebedhel, haha i wish, that person, no taking account where he is from or what he believes, is someone who tried to make a neutral environment here, not offending anybody, giving INTERNATIONAL REALIBLE SOURCES (Not Bolivian) and always according to the rules of Wikipedia, anyway I think there is no point of telling you anything else, I bet you were sweating trying to argue with him, but hey I invite you to read the whole discussion, really, please, and you will see that you don’t stand a chance on trying to defend you’re personal thought or Peruvian facts against International Sources, soon we will make a change, not in favor of Bolivia, in favor of the truth. and please don’t bother to answer this post, i know what you’re going to say Puno bla bla bla, and give me again a Peruvian newspaper as source, please don’t, instead, if you have something international, then that’s welcome, have everybody a good day! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 131.178.240.28 (talk) 11:43, 2 October 2009 (UTC)
- By the way, do you like my new signature? I took Dentren's and Lupus's style. I thought it looked cool. OH, WAIT! Wikipedia is not a forum! So I recommend you to stop posting senseless things in the page.--MarshalN20 | Talk 12:27, 2 October 2009 (UTC)
- Look who has changed, ha ha seems to me Erebedhel thought you some manners after all, but seriously, you bulled me first and now you want me to buy that, who you are trying to fool, maybe, if you had started like this as a person committed to this page, this would have been different. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 131.178.240.28 (talk) 12:57, 2 October 2009 (UTC)
- I haven't changed at all. Bullied you? I haven't bullied you at all. If you consider bullying me saying that Evo Morales and his government are a bunch worthless officials who like to use popular culture as a means to gain favor from their people; then you seriously need to get a life (I'm sure you're not Ekeko Morales). Or, at least get a Wikipedia account; but, then again, you might as well be Eberedel attempting to act as someone else. Either way, you keep creating pointless arguments, so shame on you.--MarshalN20 | Talk 13:32, 2 October 2009 (UTC)
there you go people, this is the kind of person who is in charge of this page, i mean, should we trust him, i don’t, and by the way, yeah my arguments might be poor but hey, the world goes in my favor, how??, well me and Eberedel have shown reliable resources, INTERNATIONAL RESOURSES, in case you didn’t notice, those are my arguments, but you, what you give, NEWSPAPERS, I mean come on, you tell me "shame on you", what’s that, take it seriously, your argument are not RELIABLE, HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO REPEAT IT SO YOU CAN GET IT, because I will, but I’ll say it one more time, focus please, PERUVIAN NEWSPAPERS AND LETTERS ARE NOT THE MEANS TO ASUME THAT PUNO IS THE BIRTH PLACE, hope you got it, and still waiting for a reliable source, please, me and all the people here don’t want to know what Peruvians Newspapers have to say, we want neutral non Peruvian or Bolivian facts, that’s is what this page is all about, not your patriotisms. Take care Marshall —Preceding unsigned comment added by 131.178.240.28 (talk) 14:25, 2 October 2009 (UTC)
- How am I in charge of this page? Puno is where the cultural mixture of the Spanish dance and the native americans culture took place first, hence it's the birthplace of the dance. Nonetheless, what I see as astounding in your constant remarks is your necessity to bring in the idea that the governments of these nations are struggling for ownership of the dance. The point that should be taken here is that the dance does not belong to a government, but rather it belongs a community of native andean peoples known as the Aymara. Even if the corrupt Ekeko Morales and the ignorant Garcia want to slap each other a thousand times, the fact remains that the Diablada is a Native dance of the Altiplano; it's an Andean dance (Not a Bolivian dance, not a Peruvian dance, not a Chilean dance, not an Argentinean dance, etc.). Why don't you want to understand that? I think Dentren, Lupus, and me are the only ones who seem to be in agreement with this essential idea. My question is why does it bother you so much that the dance first took place in Juli, Puno? Why do you have to think that because it took place there, then it's a Peruvian dance? Why do you even think it's a Bolivian dance? Did the Republic of Peru or the Republic of Bolivia exist at that time? Think before you talk.--MarshalN20 | Talk 15:19, 2 October 2009 (UTC)
Once more, Support your statements , i think I am dealing here with an adult not a child, I don’t care if Peru was the best country back then, if you don’t support you’re statements, is just your word, I am not taking into account your words, SUPPORT THE FACT THAT THE DIABLADA WAS BORN IN PUNO WITH NON PERUBIAN LINKS. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 131.178.241.176 (talk) 17:25, 2 October 2009 (UTC)
- You don't seem to know that it's hard to find things about the Diablada that are non-Spanish. Most of the sources are either Bolivian and Peruvian, and it's important to use both of these in order to create the article. Wikipedia supports the idea of mixing sources. For instance, I think it's important to find a source that can be used to explain why Bolivia thinks the dance was invented in Oruro. Then this can be mixed with the idea that the dance first took place in Puno in the second paragraph. Like I said before, it really doesn't matter much where the dance started; what matters is that this dance does not belong to any country (especially since the modern borders came as a result of the mestizos and the whites; and not from the actual natives), and that they are part of a multinational culture.--MarshalN20 | Talk 00:12, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- Ill repeat it again, we gave you sources, International sources, look above and you’ll find plenty of them, here I give you two:
1. the definitions of the “Diablada” according to the Real academia Española “diablada. 1. f. Danza típica de la región de Oruro, en Bolivia, llamada así por la careta y el traje de diablo que usan los bailarines. You can check it out in the Real Academia Española webb page, 2009
2. the fact that the assistant director of UNESCO expressed his solidarity with Bolivia on this issue (look for it in the references number 12, it’s a non Bolivian or Peruvian newspaper, neutral)
there you go, I ve guided you to 2 sources as exaples as you asked, all NON Bolivian, sources, now show me and international organization that is reliable and neutral that shows Puno as the birth place, I am not asking for you’re thoughts or what maybe your grandmother told you, I just want an International reliable source that backs up your facts, THAT’S IT, AS SIMPLE AS THAT, A NEUTRAL RESOURCE, please if you intent to reply, please give me sources, links, something neutral (non Peruvian), , ill wait, ok marshal, take care
IMPORTANT!- I am not asking for English or Dutch, if you have Spanish then put it, I NEVER SAID ONLY ENGLISH.—Preceding unsigned comment added by 131.178.240.161 (talk) 10:29, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- You use a dictionary definition and claim that the UNESCO said something (when they officially have said nothing). Seriously?--MarshalN20 | Talk 15:43, 4 October 2009 (UTC)
- seriously??, why don’t you give me you’re sources first and we will see who says seriously, you don’t even prove you’re point and you criticize my sources!!!!, first show me you’re NON Peruvian sources, then we talk. SUPPORT YOUR STATEMENTS ABOUT PUNO, I STILL DONT SEE ANYTHING RELIABLE AND NEUTRAL AND IS THE THIRD TIME I ASK FOR SOURCES, i wonder if you have any, at least mine are supported internationally, but you are just talk and talk, no prove. STILL WAITING! STILL WAITING. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 131.178.241.224 (talk) 14:40, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
- The article is properly sourced. "Supported internationally"? Like I stated before, the UNESCO hasn't made any official statement, and a dictionary definition doesn't go beyond a definition (it's not a historical analysis). If you need my sources, please do take a look at the article's reference section. Also, please look at WP:CIVIL, otherwise I might have to report you for being aggressive and insulting.--MarshalN20 | Talk 22:39, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
Diablada in Potosi
I don't know about the rest of you, but I read the article about Freddy Arancibia Andrade's research and thought it was rather interesting. However, I think that this source has been misused in the article in order to represent something different than what Mr. Arancibia's points out. The argument I create here by Mr. Arancibia is that the Diablada has spiritual origins in Potosi; and at various points mentions that the dance was not created in Potosi. Here are some direct quotes:
- "“Allí nació su espacio ritual, mientras que su espacio de baile se encuentra en Oruro”, explicó el investigador."
- "'Its ritual space was born there, while its space as a dance is found in Oruro,' explained the investigator."
- "Esto cambió en 1904, cuando se les permitió bailar ante la Virgen del Socavón. “Esto supuso dejar atrás su cultura norte potosina y desde ese momento aparece la diablada como baile”, asegura."
- "This changed in 1904, when they were allowed to dance in front of the Virgin of Socavon. 'This would supposedly let them leave their North Potosi culture and from that moment the Diablada appears as a dance,' he asserts."
Now, I'm assuming Good Faith from Erebedel's edits; plus, the title of this article from "La Razon" is highly misleading. If you take a look at the title, it claims that the Diablada was invented in Potosi. However, on the sub-title, it explains that it's a ritual (religious) origin. So, I think that next time sources from La Razon are submitted, the whole thing should be carefully read. Moreover, in the Spanish wiki article it states that the Bolivian historian Julia Elena Fortún explains that the Diablada began to be danced in Oruro in 1789; and this goes completely against the idea that the dance was first introduced in 1904.--MarshalN20 | Talk 12:25, 2 October 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you, I just intended to show more points of views, in case of doubt my original writing was:
- This one
- The source comes from the Bolivian newspaper “La Razón” published on August 20, 2009
- That’s based on the version of the anthropologist Freddy Arancibia Andrade; it’s nevertheless always open to debate. I consider that I was careful with the use of words to avoid what the title said “the Diablada was invented in Potosí” which could be considered misleading as Marshal thinks, so I wrote that.
- “There are two versions regarding the first records of the place where the Spanish traditions and the native Andean beliefs mixed to form what is called Diablada today”.
- The version of Juli 1576, belongs to the historian José Morales Serruto that can be found here:
- Puno.com.
- I'm open to suggestions and opinions. I think Dentren can gives us a good third opinion.
--Erebedhel (talk) 18:17, 2 October 2009 (UTC)
- Well, the thing is that I'm taking the writings of professional people, such as historians and anthropologists, as facts. These people are especially important for these kind of research as they devote their life to these matters. Government officials and other people are also important, but they can't be compared in importance with professional historians or anthropologists (In this case, Groux and Garcia Belaunde are the main government officials speaking from both sides; but I don't think either of them are actually being honest but are rather playing politics). There's also this source from the Andean Parliment which is highly neutral; it says exactly the best thing it could say: The dance is neither Peruvian or Bolivian, it's from the Andean Altiplano.--MarshalN20 | Talk 00:05, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- Honestly I fail to understand where in this section we’re talking about Groux, Belaunde or ownership. We’re talking about Freddy Arancibia Andrade and José Morales Serruto and specifically that paragraph. --Erebedhel (talk) 01:33, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- Dr. Ricardo Arbulú also presents the idea that the Diablada was originated in Juli, Puno. So, it's not simply an idea from historian Morales Serruto.--MarshalN20 | Talk 02:17, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- Complementing what Freddy Arancibia Andrade says there is Nicomedes Santa Cruz, the first source, he also says that:
The "Danza de los Diablos" or "Diablada" had in the zone of Potosí and later in the miner city of Oruro its starting point, regardless that nowadays there are over 250 locations of Bolivia and Peru where it's interpreted
— Nicomedes Santa Cruz
- Yes, but you should take into account that good Nico did this report without taking into account information from the people of Puno. This is very classic of people from Lima who have a tendency to ignore the culture of their surrouding cities. Moreover, Nico was a self-taught black man who was an excellent speaker and poet, but in terms of recording information was nothing more than a journalist (Not a historian). For several years, Nico was an authority in the knowledge of Afro-Peruvian dances and other such things because he was among the first people who took the time to investigate by asking people who still remembered the old stories about how the dances were created. However, the problem is that nowadays actual historians are beginning to find out that many of the things that Nico presented were not as accurate as he thought they were. Nicomedes did not speak the Native American language and therefore never investigated much of anything in regards to them (However, I do think that he did a rather good investigation on how the Zamacueca also has Quechua roots). I suppose you can use him as a means to support the idea of Potosi; but Mr. Arancibia's article (once again) has nothing to do with the origin of the dance in Potosi. Arancibia only talks about the "spiritual origin" of the dance, not the actual origin of it.--MarshalN20 | Talk 02:47, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- Oh that's just genius I have never thought that Nicomedes Santa Cruz only is respected for some things and for others not. That's perfect.--Erebedhel (talk) 03:12, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- Seriously? I try to explain to you something about Nicomedes Santa Cruz, a person whom I deeply respect, and yet you mock it by saying "that's perfect"?--MarshalN20 | Talk 03:36, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- If you consider yourself more acknowledged than him to judge which parts of his book are correct and which aren't, I think you're disrespecting him. That phrase is in the very same paragraph as the Autos sacramentales quoted in the first paragraph (together with the version that the Diablada has Uru roots as well) so since there is no satisfactory explanation why my contribution should be reverted and changed like that I'm re-editing that part. Thank you.--Erebedhel (talk) 03:54, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- First you say I hate Bolivians, and now you say that I'm being disrespectful to Nicomedes Santa Cruz? What else are you going to say next, that I hate Peruvians? Just listen to yourself for a moment and then think about what you're writing. I especifically wrote in my response, "I suppose you can use him as a means to support the idea of Potosi." This is exactly what you did, but instead of using it appropiately you once again re-insert the erroneous sentence of the person who sets the dance as being born "spiritually" in Potosi and claim it to be saying that it started in Potosi. I've fixed this error again as by this time I'm no longer assuming that as a Good Faith edit. Please use sources correctly.--MarshalN20 | Talk 04:51, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- You failed to read and understand that the entire text I wrote belongs to the quoted part in the article, in the text I avoided to mention that it was created or anything the text is not biased and if you consider is not, request mediation, meanwhile you can't revert my edits.--Erebedhel (talk) 05:12, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- If you think that you can get away with manipulating Wikipedia policy in order to protect your incorrect usage of sources, then you're certainly not aware of the complexity of this system. Bullying editors and threatening them, as you did in your edit summary, is not acceptable. Just as incorrectly using sources in order to push your POV is equally not acceptable.--MarshalN20 | Talk 05:37, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- let's an admin decide who violated the rules. It's not up to you--Erebedhel (talk) 05:45, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- What are you talking about? You're the one here accusing me of ownership and threatening me with the 3RR. I explained to you that you're using the source incorrectly, and yet you stubbornly continue to add it despite all of the explanations that I have provided in this discussion. Bullying wikipedians and attempting to use Wikipedia policy to your favor is no way to demonstrate that you're interested in improving this article.--MarshalN20 | Talk 06:09, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- I'm just asking you to read carefully what I wrote in the article, I tried to reason with you to show you that regardless you can have your observations to the newspaper I tried carefully to not use them. Only took what represented appropriate information, you opened this section I asked Dentren to give us his opinion yet you and only you spammed it bringing back politics when it was only about a paragraph instead of waiting till he have time to give us a third opinion, now it's too late he won't bother to read all the discussion again which I tried to avoid. Then you mentioned that other historian supported the Juli version. I mentioned the exact same paragraph from where you took the introduction of the text saying the same as the newspaper did. I didn't eliminate the Juli version I just added another theory, that's normal procedure when there are more versions of a same thing. I ask you to read the manual of Wikipedia about NPOV that's what it's recommended just explaining who say what and let the reader decide. If you want I can give you tomorrow a "Review" of each newspaper you used, to what? to start again with a 100kb discussion because you are not willing to consider that there are more versions and that what you believe is the only possible way. Do you think I didn't notice that it was you the one who changed the order of the photos and the beginning to put always first Peru? and that even though you ranted before to me for explaining you what I've read during the last months and I was just resuming it to you accusing me of "Original Investigation" now you bring again your concept of "dances with devils" and pretend to open sections of "variations" with other dances that have devils but aren't "Diabladas" based entirely because you saw the horns do you have any reference that says that those "dances with devils" are Diabladas? no because the one who made a hopeless attempt to say exactly that there were other dances with devils in Latin America and all were related (but not exactly the same) was me. So you don't have to say it textually but it's obvious that you have the intention to control this article, you think you have the authority to evaluate the sources and what others do, and you have an agenda here, that's disruptive editing. Now I'll leave you to destroy this article, but I think you should try to read what others tell you patiently because you show a dangerous pattern of lack of attention, you start arguing without really understand what it's written in front of you, a clear proof of that is the completely unnecessary mention to Groux and Belaunde above, and the very same reason this complete discussion started when I never said that because of the UNESCO mention traditional it's private property of Bolivia, actually I never interpreted by myself the words of the UNESCO I just quoted them, nevertheless you lost control and started a discussion with your head, well that's your problem, but I know that if you pretend to do an unilateral edition of this article when you lack of the capability to read a simple phrase without creating the wrong images in your head it wont have a good outcome. --Erebedhel (talk) 06:52, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- That's too long Pedro.--MarshalN20 | Talk 15:54, 4 October 2009 (UTC)
Diablada Chilena
Is there anyone that can help expand the section on La Tirana's Diablada. Is it different from the other Diabladas? If so, in what aspects is it different? I think we all know that the dance in La Tirana is derived from when Bolivia occupied the zone, but maybe there are differences from it that make it distinct from other Diablada dances.--MarshalN20 | Talk 02:59, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- http://www.memoriachilena.cl/temas/dest.asp?id=folclor3diablada
- http://www.scielo.cl/pdf/chungara/v38n1/art05.pdf (PDF)
- --Erebedhel (talk) 03:13, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
- As far I have readen it derives from Peruvian and Bolivan workers that danced it there before the conquest of the Territory by Chile.Dentren | Talk 22:55, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
Son de Los Diablos
This is an Afro-Peruvian dance that is a variation of the Diablada. I was thinking about creating a section called "Similar dances" and to include the Son de Los Diablos in it, but then I noticed that the Son is actually a regional variation created in Lima through the Afro-Peruvian community. Its roots are the Diablada that originated in the Altiplano. Now, I think that in Guatemala and other places there is a similar dance to the Diablada, but they have nothing to do with the one created in the Altiplano.--MarshalN20 | Talk 03:07, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
How to improve this article
I think the current verasion as of 6 october[1] is acceptable. For now. I would need a seies of impovements:
- To futher clarify the origins with some statment like: "the modern diablada emerged fom...", so we distinguish older rites and dances from the ones from today.
- To have xhange the title of "in pupolar culture" to "2009 dispute" or "Bolivian revindication", bevcause this section is rather about that than about pupolar culture.
- To avoid the word propaganda as it is used in the section In popular culture, because it has negative connotations (,may implies lies or omissions). I we put forward all information currently availabble in media, I sure, reades will anyway get the impessions some editors here have that the claims of exclusivity are unfouded.
- To base the article, and specially the origins and history on citations from mayor works or scientific papars not newspapaers that may not include incovenient information. Dentren | Talk 23:12, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
- All of the current sources, with the exception of a couple (Punomagico probably being one of them, though in the archives there is a mention that the Punomagico source has other sources listed to it which could probably be useful), are reliable. Now, they're not the "most reliable" of things that could be found, but we must be honest and understand one basic thing: The Diablada is a relatively unknown dance beyond South America. To be even more exact, in several aspects it's a relatively unknown dance beyond the Altiplano. Not many people have bothered to write about it beyond a handful of historians, and the current Miss Universe dispute has "shed some light" into the matter which otherwise would probably not have been shed until some time in the far future.--MarshalN20 | Talk 23:49, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
- If better sources can be found, I also agree that they should be placed in the article.--MarshalN20 | Talk 23:49, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
- In regards to the "modern Diablada," the problem is that there are many "modern" Diabladas. Until I was reading one of Nicomedes Santa Cruz's works, I had no idea that the Son de los Diablos was actually a form of Diablada. I had seen it before in Peru danced by some black people, but it had never come my mind that it was related to a "Diablada." I think that the general idea of a Diablada is of that danced in the Altiplano. However, as demonstrated by the sources, the Diablada didn't just stay in the Altiplano. It originated in the Altiplano (Juli, Oruro, or Potosi), but it later spread to other places (La Tirana, Lima, Cajabamba, Piura, etc.).--MarshalN20 | Talk 23:49, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
- As an example, take a look at the first Diablada picture, the one drawn in the 1700s. Look at their instruments. Then look at the Son de los Diablos picture, and their instruments (two are essentially the same). What should be considered as a "modern" Diablada?--MarshalN20 | Talk 23:49, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
- Finally, I still think that the word "Propaganda" best describes what Bolivia is doing. I don't see anything wrong with it. When WW II started, the United States also started a propaganda campaign against the Japanese and Germans. However, another propaganda campaign pro-Allied troops also began. There are different kinds of propaganda, and there is no negative connotation to the word. What other way can Bolivia's actions be called? We have to be honest, not kind.--MarshalN20 | Talk 23:53, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
Corrections
Independently to the discussion of the Origen of the "diablada" or difference between it and "diablada punena" and "danza de diablos" (to me they are all different) but I leave it the hands of the experts or stuburn. when Oruro or Potosi are mention it should be clarified that these cities are in Bolivia. It should be corrected that the "diablada" isnt an intrical part of the Carnaval de Oruro. The reality is that it is important in all festivities throughout Bolivia. Unlike In Peru, the "diablada" is danced in all Bolivia where thousands Of fraternitis exist throughout the Bolivian territory. The dance is presented in all cultural, religious, educational and alike celebrations. "There isn't a day that the diablada isn't danced in Bolivia." —Preceding unsigned comment added by 166.205.134.6 (talk) 07:57, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
- There is no Diablada expert contributing to this article. Up to this point, it has been demonstrate that each of us is ignorant in various aspects of this dance. Where is it mentioned that the Diablada is "intrical" (Whatever that means)? And that Bolivians dance the Diablada every single day sounds very nice; but that might be one of the reasons Bolivia has such a high mortality rate.--MarshalN20 | Talk 12:54, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
To my knowledge the Diablada is danced mostly in South of Peru, West of Bolivia, and North of Chile. The fact that Bolivia has the dance held everyday in different provinces does not prove it came from Bolivia. The regions Oruro and Potosi at the time were in the province of Upper Peru, the way they should be put in he article should be: ex. ...Potosi/Oruro in the region of Upper Peru, Present-day Bolivia,... I'm guessing you misspelled whatever word you were trying to write, that word doesn't exist. Thousands of fraternities exist in all the countries who the Diablada is important to: Peru, Chile and Bolivia. As for the quote, there is not such quote that i am aware of, but by all means if it does indeed exist please post it's author. Unknown Lupus | Talk 19:17, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
- I would say that the Diablada danced in northern Chile is veru limited, I would say that appart from La Tirana that was established by Peruvian and Bolivian workers there are few or non other ocassions when the dance is danced apart from traditional dances shows and competitions all over Chile.Dentren | Talk 20:50, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
Original Research by Erebedele
I have found that user Ethelred has included a series of overstatements and unecessary original research into the article. Among these are:
- "of the royal Inca rulers of prehispanic Andean countries"
Inca Garcilaso is often regarded as being part of the Royal Inca family of Peru; which in terms of Inca royalty are the "prime" descendants of the Inca royal bloodline. Replacing Peru with "Andean countries" is more of an insult to the memory of this person. As you may not know, there were a series of different Inca rulers across South America. The main two lines being in Peru (Cuzco) and in Ecuador (Quito).
- "that was written in Aymara simultaneously in four cities"
No such thing is mentioned. Garcilaso only speaks of the Aymara version of Genesis being taught in Juli.
- "(where the figure of the archangel Micheal does not appear)"
Obvious overstatement. No mention of this is made in the source.
- "(the struggle between good and evil)"
Once again, not mentioned at all in the source.
Gentlemen, if we are going to be using sources, please use them correctly. Do not plagiarize from the source, and do not include overstatements (Hyperboles) that promote a particular point of view.--MarshalN20 | Talk 22:01, 19 October 2009 (UTC)
- In compliance of WP:APR I won't reply to any of MarshalN20's personal attacks and I'll refer strictly to the content of the article.
- Is well known that the Inca empire spread across the Andean Countries, as mentioned above Ecuador, Peru, Bolivia, Chile, etc.
- It's all in page 227 [2]
- it can be sourced quoting the Bible itself, just wait a minute I'll do it.
- if those comments aren't allowed why there are plenty of them across the article, specially in Diablada#Bolivia's demand?--Erebedhel - Talk 22:17, 19 October 2009 (UTC)
- Page 227 does not have the information you provide. It only mentions Juli as the place where the Auto Sacramental was written in Aymara. Also, I haven't personally attacked you at all; get a grip on your imagination. "Quoting the Bible"? You're going to go all the way to quote on the Bible in order to add an overstatement? There are no overstatements in the "Bolivia's demand" section. There's a difference between a flow of information of the same subject, and overstatements that only serve to point out things that are only trying to promote a particular POV. Moreover, using the "Bible" is a primary source of information, and you would be breaking WP:OR.--MarshalN20 | Talk 01:07, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
Guys, keep your cool heads on. This is not a forum. Erebedhel, your edits are irrelevant. You are taking out important information of the article. Yes the Inca Empire ruled over present-day countries such as: Peru, Ecuador, Bolivia, and Chile but the royal power was held in Cuzco. I'm asking you though to think about what I'm gonna say as to why the Diablada dance can not be Bolivian or Chilean. Both countries did not exist back then, so how can a folklore that was created more than a century before the countries existed be called Bolivian or Chilean? reason as to why Peru seems to be the closest place of the origin of the Diablada is that back then every land in South America under Spanish rule, about 85%, was Peruvian due to the the Viceroyalty that was established there. Although the country, The Republic of Peru, did not exist back then the lands were still Peruvian-Spanish. I'm not trying to insult Bolivia, Chile or anybody, but if you do feel insulted then I'm sorry but it's just simple common sense that is always overlooked. To Marshal, I'm asking you in the nicest way possible, if you do feel the need to keep arguing with Erebedhel then please do so through email or some other sort of communication. Both of you have one thing in common, stubbornness. But this is not a forum, just as both of you have stated over and over. I'm not saying you can't post here but if you answer each others insults over and over again then this is a pointless discussion. I'm still gonna have a close eye on the article and it's discussion page. Again if you feel I insulted you then I'm sorry. Unknown Lupus | Talk 01:58, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
- I do not wish to argue and I won't do it, I just corrected what the sources really said yet me and my country are being insulted for telling the truth. This is an encyclopedia and I don't deserve this kind of treatment. I do not recognize any authority of MarshalN20 or Unknown Lupus you don't have any right to treat me like if you have any kind of power over me to deny my right to edit this article, I did not break any rules and I did not insulted any country here as you did. Besides I think you should read the articles of Viceroyalty of Peru and Peru to realize that they aren't the same thing, that fantasy of yours to think that the Republic of Peru was some kind of empire ruling Bolivia isn't correct the only empire ruling the continent was Spain, Peru got its independence from Spain in the 19th century as all the other countries in the region (Declared in 1821 - Consolidated in 1824 and Recognized in 1879). I'll continue with my right to add sourced material to the article and my right to correct lies in it. Dentren, MarshalN20 and myself have the exact same right to do so and I'll not tolerate that anyone who is not an administrator to bully me and harass me for my nationality.--Erebedhel - Talk 03:01, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
- An additional comment for those who think that using the same words of the cited texts constitute plagiarism please before reverting my edits check WP:SYN:
The Harvard manual does not call violating this rule "plagiarism". Instead, plagiarism is defined as using a source's information, ideas, words, or structure without citing them.
- NOBODY, and I repeat, NOBODY has been harrasing you for your nationality. YOU keep adding biased Pro-Bolivia information in the article that is obviously completely against the WP:NPOV rule. YOU keep attempting to use dictionary definitions as reliable sources in an encyclopedia, which goes against WP:NAD. YOU keep thinking of yourself as some sort of heroic patriot defending Bolivian "ownership" of the Diablada, which goes against WP:OWN. YOU are the constantly personally attacking other users by accusing me of ownership and sock-puppetry, and accusing Uknown_Lupos of being by sock-puppet; both which go against WP:NPA. YOU are the one who has not reached consensus at all, which goes against WP:Consensus. YOU are the one that keeps making disruptive edits in the article; read WP:DE. YOU are the one that keeps adding FAKE information and overstatements that are not mentioned in the sources. I suggest you reflect upon your actions and realize the errors of your way.--MarshalN20 | Talk 13:01, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
- Calm down everybody, there is no war going on here. We have to acept that this article is curently controversial so it is logical that unsourced material might be contested and removed. Then i wpuld like to recomend you to read the book El quechua y el aymara by Alejandro Ortiz Rescaniere. Read part if halfyear ago and I remember it spoke in some pages about the diablada. If I have not wrong in that book there is perhaps some lines to source "the struggle between good and evil". About the Inca Garcilaso de la Vega, is it neseray to present him as the "first mestizo writer of colonial Andean South America" and "a direct blood descendant of the royal Inca rulers of prehispanic Cuzco", does that gives him more credibility? Whee are the sources for these claims?
- Finally I would like to invite you to edit the article carnavalito.Dentren | Talk 20:05, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
- Yes, it would be necessary to include that for Garcilaso as it would serve to explain who he is and why his information is even relevant. However, you're not understanding the point of "the struggle between good and evil" in the sense that I am using it; but that is probably not your fault as I took that particular description out of context. Please look back at one of the edits done by Erebel and you'll find exactly what I mean with him adding "overstatements" in the information he provided.--MarshalN20 | Talk 20:57, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
nothing makes sense in this article. bolivia originated the diablada, not peru and not chile. all chileans and peruvians in the article are trying to post lies and do not want to listen to the truth. bolivian brothers, we must unite in order to defeat this menace. peruvians and chileans want to steal our culture and our lands. we have to fight for our rights.
marshaln20, you should go to bolivia and see the carnaval de oruro. erebedhel, brother, you are the type of bolivians we should all be. you are the defender of bolivia, and everybody here at the altiplano loves you deeply. you have to continue the fight. dentren, you sadistic chilean, you cant get enough of taking bolivian sea? now you want for peruvians to steal our culture. bolivia = diablada. the famed RAE agrees with us.
Chile down, Peru down. Go BOLIVIA!!! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 165.91.173.68 (talk) 17:36, 21 October 2009 (UTC)
Addition: Dentren, that chilean dirt that all bolivians should spit on, seems to be a puppet of marshal. i think marshal is also chilean. he passes himself to be perusian, but he probably has never even been to peru. he doesnt sound perusian either. chilean cholos, stop trying to help peru steal our culture!!! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 165.91.173.68 (talk) 17:39, 21 October 2009 (UTC)
diablada = bolivia
look at maps. this shows the truth. oruro started the dance. it spread to other parts as well. dont listen to peruans and chileans, they are in a conspiracy to take away our land and culture. bolivia has to stay strong. bye. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 165.91.173.68 (talk) 17:42, 21 October 2009 (UTC)
for rotos and peruans
stop taking our culture!! we will have our revenge. chile is the crap of south america, and peru is a worthless country that likes to steal things. go Bolivia BOLIVIA BOLIVIA!!!! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 165.91.173.68 (talk) 17:44, 21 October 2009 (UTC)
And Erebedhel Claims We Insult Other Nationalities
Posted on Article by 165.91.173.68: Chileans stole our sea, and now Peruvians want to steal our culture. Bolivia has to demonstrate strength in times of hardship. Evo Morales also agrees with this idea, and he is a native of Bolivia who has danced the Diablada. There is no single day where the Diablada is not danced in Bolivia. Peru and Chile are trying to steal Bolivian culture.
It's actually funny how he tries, but fails, to insult Marshal and Dentren but doesn't have the guts to insult me because i'm not South American. I find you a hypocrite because you a insulting Peruvians when Peru was the only country to help Bolivia when Chile took the Bolivian coastal territory, due to Bolivia failing to keep their part of the bargain to not raise the taxes on Chilean exports. There can't be such a thing as Bolivian folklore and since you keep talking about "simple sense" then think about how can you call a dance that was created centuries before a country existed part of their culture but not as Andean folklore, how it really is, but as Bolivian folklore? If you want to have a real discussion like civilized people and share thoughts, and heck maybe you'll learn your wrong or that we're wrong (highly doubt it since you just insult), then i suggest making an account which will take no more than 1 minute instead of showing your weak side by using Guerrilla-like tactic of posting and running before someone answers the post. Right now you're only making Bolivia look bad. And by the way the term "roto" is childish term for Chileans as well as misspelling Peruvian with "Peruan". I may not like your ideas and thoughts but that does that mean I'm gonna call you "Boliche" or "Bolian"? No, that's why I spell it correctly to show respect, even though you don't deserve it I am not one to judge. Unknown Lupus | Talk 21:25, 21 October 2009 (UTC)
- I consider that the best way to bring peace to this talk page is to follow the recommendations of WP:APR:
The purpose of talk pages is to discuss how to improve articles. If you have opinions about the contributions others have made, feel free to discuss those contributions on any relevant talk page. But if you have opinions about other contributors as people, they don't belong there — or frankly, anywhere on Wikipedia.
- We'll occasionally find comments made by inexperienced contributors and we may not agree with them, but I consider that the best we can do is to avoid replying to each one of them and only focus on the comments relevant to the content. I filled a Mediation Cabal form here Wikipedia:Mediation_Cabal/Cases/2009-10-18/Diablada and I hope we can soon have a mediator to help us reach consensus about the page. I Suggest that meanwhile we avoid personal confrontation and maybe we can prepare some blueprints of the article in our respective User Pages to expose them to the mediator later. --Erebedhel - Talk 21:46, 21 October 2009 (UTC)